you and your family have just rented an apartment and one or two problems occurred.

You and your family have just rented an apartment and one or two problems occurred. Write a letter to the landlord. Describe the problems and tell him what you want him to do.

You and your family have just rented an apartment and one or two problems occurred. Write a letter to the landlord. Describe the problems and tell him what you want him to do.
Hi NITIN,

LETTER:

Dear Mr Vivek,

I am your new tenant in 403, Al
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Downtown. I
This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
with my family a week ago.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am writing this

letter to appraise you of
This words can be replaced with:a number of
some
problems, my family is facing in the apartment.

The taps in the bathroom are leaking.
Because of this
, my sister has slipped twice. The front door is
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).blocked, and
blocked

and
we tried
This words can be replaced with:abundance
plenty
of times to open it
This words can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
ended in vain. The shower is
also
not working

properly
.

All these problems needs an immediate action. You are the owner of this apartment,
hopefully
you may have the contacts of

carpenters and plumbers. You may call them
directly
or share those numbers with me
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so
I can call them,

and
This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectify
fix
these issues. As you know, I have signed a tenant agreement for one year with you and you have

included maintenance charges in that.

Hoping for action from your side.

Yours
faithfully
,

Nitin
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