health experts say that walking is the best form of exercise; however people now work less.

Health experts say that walking is the best form of exercise; however people now work less. What could be the reason for this? What might encourage people to walk longer distance?

Health experts say that walking is the best form of exercise; however people now work less. What could be the reason for this? What might encourage people to walk longer distance?
A daily walk of 30 minutes
is said
to be the best exercise. Our grandparents
used
to walk for miles on
end
to reach their destination.
Today
, people walk much less.
Many
factors are responsible for this. We all seek comfort. Walking on foot can be tiring. Needless to say people prefer to travel by buses or cars whenever they have access to them. Motor vehicles are
fast
and
thus
they
also
help
save.
unfortunately
, this habit of using the car or bus has several
negative
consequences. Most of us know spend hours in the office sitting in front of computer.
Because of this
sedentary lifestyle we have developed
many
health problems like obesity, diabetes and heart trouble. We can avoid most of these lifestyle diseases by
simply
walking for 30 minutes a day.
Many
people who have
given
up the habit of walking are unaware of the health problems they face. The
government
and health workers need to create awareness among the
general public
about the benefits of walking. People who
use
a car should park their vehicle farther from their office and text app
instead
of the elevator. Children to should
be encouraged
to walk to school. Once they
get
used
to this habit, they more likely to stick to it in the future too.
To conclude
, lack of time and the need for comfort are the reasons that
prevent
people from walking.
However
, most of us will
start
working again if we are aware of its health benefits.
So
, creating awareness is the key. The
government
and the media can play an
important
role in this.
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