if you could change one improtant thing about your hometown, what would you change.

If you could change one improtant thing about your hometown ,what would you change. Use reason and specific examples to support you answer?

If you could change one improtant thing about your hometown, what would you change. Use reason and specific examples to support you answer?
Change mean to do improvement in a better way,
consequently
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sometimes
changes are play
significantly
role for the society. I could change in my native play related single essential thing.
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, I would like to change the neighbors and society behavior for one another. The main reason for change is that it would be helpful for community. Nowadays, people are too busy in their personal and professional life,
consequently
they haven't keen interest of their neighbors. After family, neighbor is the second family for human creature. Individuals are shift their place due to their job,
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so
they do not interact with the society person, well it
is need
to improvement.
For instance
, one survey conducted in Australia, where people do not know about the occupation and family background of their neighbors.
Furthermore
, it would be beneficial for security reasons,
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sometimes
next
to your person is not available at home if they introduced each other. It would be
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good
for the society.
On the other hand
, people
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is
aware about the movement of their close
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house
.
For example
, neighbors do not know about any
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their neighbors
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house
.
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Meanwhile
these things are
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very
harmful for the future. I
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live
in a well known society and all the facilities and amenities are there,
on the contrary
in a number of part of the city people do not look their neighbors for several months.
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Total Band
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Coherence and Cohesion
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Lexical Resource
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Grammatical Range
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