children have too much freedom nowadays.

Children have too much freedom nowadays.

Children have too much freedom nowadays.
In recent years, due to the development of communications most parents have become open-minded and their children have much more freedom as other children in the past. However, there have been a number of arguments between
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people
that children may not be free and there
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must
be a number of limits for them.
On the whole
, there have been a number of noticeable reasons supporting this idea that freedom is an essential thing for children nowadays.

Firstly
, if children have almost noun or limited freedom, then they
are confined
by their parents. However, it would encourage them to achieve what they want to do.
For example
, if a parent doesn't
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let
their boy have a computer and internet connection, they would do anything that
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helps
them to achieve one of them. The boy will do anything to have them, he would
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tell
a number of lies to his parents or pass the school to go out with other friends. He can go to a number of places that have free Wi-Fi. He can play the computer games which he may not play with his other friends.
Nevertheless
, it can’t be a
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good
idea to limit them, and they will always find a number of solutions.

On the other hand, the idea that freedom for children is an essential thing can
be supported
by several reasons,
on the contrary
the main feature previously this is that they need to
be guided
and informed by their parents about what are the results of the options
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given
them. On the internet, there are a number of websites and games supporting violence, as an example. Children can find them
easily
.
On the contrary
if parents inform them of the results such as having trouble sleeping and stimulating violence on their behaviors, then it will
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reduce
their interest.
Furthermore
, there will be a striking decrease in the encouragement of them to play those kinds of games and
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watch
a number of videos that have
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bad
effects; however, informing children previously making them free is necessary.

In sum up, limitation on everyone and
essentially
children has
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bad
effects. Encouraging them to find solutions to achieve what they want.
In contrast
, if they are informed about the results, then it would
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help
them to be knowledgeable to
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make
a
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good
decision. Children need to be free and be informed about freedom.
6
Total Band
5.5
Coherence and Cohesion
5.5
Lexical Resource
6.5
Grammatical Range
7
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