wildlife population around the world has decreased by around 50% over the last 50 yr.

Wildlife population around the world has decreased by around 50% over the last 50 yr. what can we do to help protect the wildlife round the world ?

Wildlife population around the world has decreased by around 50% over the last 50 yr. what can we do to help protect the wildlife round the world?
Wildlife population is the integral part of our ecosystem. Wildlife population depends upon
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things for survival. For the past 50 years, the world's wildlife population has declined by about half. There are
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factors affects by human activities which could be responsible for the destruction in wildlife population.

The major issues
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overpopulation, deforestation, urban lifestyle, overexploitation. The life was
totally
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five decades ago.
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human population was less at that time due to low medical advancements and equipments. As compared to that time,
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species are
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endangered.

However
, there
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be balance in an ecosystem. We
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should
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conserving
the forests. The urbanization could
be occurred
at
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unfertilized land where no animal home will
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destroy
.
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also
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programmes
for awareness to
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contraceptives and not being
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added
to overpopulation.

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, The overpopulation causes several major public issues which
eventually
caused overexploitation of resources.

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People
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eat less meat, and
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prohibited
the hunting to save animal and
hence
, animal life.
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Total Band
5.5
Coherence and Cohesion
5.5
Lexical Resource
6.5
Grammatical Range
5.5
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