the map below shows the development of the village of ryemouth between 1995 and present.

The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Write a report based on the map.IELTS-Academic-task-1-development-village

The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Write a report based on the map. IELTS-Academic-task-1-development-village
The two maps illustrate the main development which have been witnessed in a
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small
village called
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Ryemouth
from 1995 till
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now
. In an
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arial
view, as time pass by we can notice several
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changes
in this area which includes increase in number of houses, introduction of sports facilities and elimination of fishing industry.

In 1995, the south of the village where the sea,
was found
with fishing port along with a large fish market turned to
being replaced
by 4 apartments and the shops become restaurants. While the
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cafe
next
to the fish market and the hotel on the other side of the road remain the same for years. The farmland and forest park situated in the northeastern side of the village has been converted into a golf club and a tennis court with parking facilities. The main housing of the village
was located
in the northwest side with a
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few number
of houses and 4 of them
are surrounded
by coastal road. Although the
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old
houses remain same, new ones have been built beside it.
5.5
Total Band
5.5
Coherence and Cohesion
5
Lexical Resource
6.5
Grammatical Range
5.5
Task Achievement
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