the image shows the different stages involved in making olive oil.

the image shows the different stages involved in making olive oil.

the image shows the different stages involved in making olive oil.
The diagram gives the information about a number of steps that involved in produ8 olive oil.

Overall
, it is
clearly
observed that, there are at approximately five main stages. All the steps are crucial, if any step
is missed
, it will halt the whole process.

To
begin
, olive
leaves
are collected
from olive trees. Then these
leves
have
been stored
in mill. After mill procedures,
leaves
are placed
in a container and water
is poured
in this container. Along with this, separation stage is
started
, where damaged and waste material
is removed
.

Followed by, the mixture goes into olive oil return, where more water is
added
. Once this process has ended, the olive oil is ready to
be bottled
also
it can
be stored
.
Finally
, oil has prepared to be
used
and export to the customers.
6
Total Band
5.5
Coherence and Cohesion
5.5
Lexical Resource
6.5
Grammatical Range
6
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