Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am writing this letter
to invite you to celebrate our traditional festival Deepawali with us this year. While we
were studying together last year, you promised to visit me and believe me, this is the best
time of the year to
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comeDeepawali is our national festival. It falls in the month of October or November. It
literally
means rows of lights.
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Itis celebrated
to commemorate the return of Lord Rama toAyodhya after fourteen years of exile. This is one festival which all Indians celebrate. A
month
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buyday. On the day of Deepawali we worship Goddess Lakshmi, the symbol of wealth and
also
burn crackers. There is lots of fun and frolic.Ever since I finished my course at Leeds University and came back home, I have talked
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somuch about you to my parents that they are all
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seeIndians have not forgotten our traditional celebrations even if we have become a part of
the global village which
is influenced
by the western culture.We would be
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honouredwelcome to bring your parents along if they can spare the time. I assure you we will
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makeit a memorable holiday for you.
Hoping to
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soonYours
lovingly
,Kiran