As days passed by we become more advanced in terms of science and technology.
we lead a modern lifestyle when it
about our health we go back and
traditional medicines. My experience proves my notion right.
What
a
's life more successful, if not his health? Nowadays
are getting suffer from
health issues by the influence of modern lifestyles and it becomes incurable by the
of modern medicine. COVID-19 is the best example for this situation which we are experiencing
right
.
we
scientists and research groups in our country, it becomes
to introduce a better
this pandemic situation.
in terms of development by modern facilities and lifestyles.
believe that there will be an answer for every health problem when we follow traditional
medical system. The main drawback of modern medicines are the side effects which we lack in
traditional medicines. They are
cheaper than modern medicine in which everyone can afford.
proper treatment and can be
healthy.
to
our health conditions.
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