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The verb 'to depend' requires the preposition '(up)on': "depends
on".depends on
depends
What
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makes
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with :individualresidentcitizen
man
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people
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different
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use
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with :nowadays
now
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Eventhough
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best".have the best
have best
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with :arduous
hard
as
well
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with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
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there have been made
tremendous
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with :modifiesalters
changes
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number ofnumerous
many
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with :individualsnationsociety
people
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with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
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, every
individual This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced
with :acquire
get
Consider using a past participle here: "staid",
"stayed".staidstayed
stay
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, the usage of
traditional medicines in place of modern medicine This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced
with :assistsassistances
helps
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with :ameliorate
improve