more and more people are suffering from health problems caused by a modern lifestyle which cannot

More and more people are suffering from health problems caused by a modern lifestyle which cannot be treated with modern medicines. Some people think that a return to traditional medicine should be encouraged.

More and more people are suffering from health problems caused by a modern lifestyle which cannot be treated with modern medicines. Some people think that a return to traditional medicine should be encouraged.
As days passed by we become more advanced in terms of science and technology.
Eventhough
we lead a modern lifestyle when it
comes
about our health we go back and
depends
traditional medicines. My experience proves my notion right.

What
makes
a
man
's life more successful, if not his health? Nowadays
many
people
are getting suffer from
different
health issues by the influence of modern lifestyles and it becomes incurable by the
use
of modern medicine. COVID-19 is the best example for this situation which we are experiencing right
now
.
Eventhough
we
have best
scientists and research groups in our country, it becomes
hard
to introduce a better
as well
as effective solution to control and
stop
this pandemic situation.
On the other hand
there have
been made
tremendous
changes
in terms of development by modern facilities and lifestyles.

However
,
many
people
believe that there will be an answer for every health problem when we follow traditional medical system. The main drawback of modern medicines are the side effects which we lack in traditional medicines. They are
very
cheaper than modern medicine in which everyone can afford.
As a result
, every individual
get
proper treatment and can be
stay
healthy.

To conclude
, the usage of traditional medicines in place of modern medicine
helps
to
improve
our health conditions.
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