some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school

Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day. Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day. Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones.
When topic of using mobile phones by children at school, there
are divided
opinions.
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some
are of the viewpoint is that children
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be prohibited
from utilizing their cellular telephones during the school day;
however
, a few
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people
suggest that should
be approved
to
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use
their mobile phones. Both the views are would be
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explained
.

Discussing the former view, the foremost reason of using cell phones restricted at their study place is that mobiles are distracting while they are studying. They spend most of the time on social media for communicating to others
instead
their study.
For example
, the application of
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facebook
,
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instagram
, and
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snapchat
.
Besides
this, children
are interested
in other activities. There are several websites, which are using for various purpose by children on their institution such as for playing video
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gammes
,
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some
videos, and
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many
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seaching
sites, which are wasting
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thier
time.

On the contrary
,
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some
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people
opposed that cause is that children can find regarding their study on the internet. They can search on the
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different
websites from their cellular phones, while they need answers of the
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quetions
related to their education.
Moreover
, They can save
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some
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important
documents about their study. There are
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many
tasks and
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pdfs
, which difficult to remember for them,
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so
they can store in their telephones.

To conclude
and offer my inclination, I would support the
first
view, due to this they can
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concentrat
on their study without any disturbance, and
also
they do worth their quality time on their study place. It is the best way to focus on their
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eductaion
.
6
Total Band
6.5
Coherence and Cohesion
5
Lexical Resource
6.5
Grammatical Range
6.5
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