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To with the problems, gasses emitted from the burning of fuel, which is to operate air crafts, are causing numerous air pollution. Due to this, the carbon monoxide and the carbon dioxide ratios are escalating in the atmosphere. from the sun. To illustrate, 70% of the dreadful gases in the atmosphere are an effect of the overuse of airplanes and are contributing to global warming. Another issue of such a trend is that these space machines require a plethora of raw material for their manufacturing.
One of the solutions to rectify the increasing environmental problems would be taxing the flights or increasing the prices of tickets. It would divert people towards the other sources of traveling such as through the land transports. . in sorting the issues to .
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it is the time to preserve mother earth. Perhaps in the future, having resolved the issues of increasing pollution, there is hope people will enjoy the fresh air.