the graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015.

The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015.

The
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given
line graph provides information about how
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many
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people
visited four museums in
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different
countries in the world from 1980 to 2015.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that, Louvre Museum remained to be the most popular choice throughout the time frame with Vatican Museums to a close second. The London Science Museum was the least choice by the
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end
of
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given
period.

In 1980, around 8 million
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people
visited Louvre Museum. This figure experienced an upward trend and reached to about 9. 8 million visitors by 2015.
Likewise
, Vatican Museums followed the same trajectory. The number of visitors began at approximately 5 million in 1980 which then
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got
doubled at the
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end
of the period (roughly 9. 5 million).

On the contrary
, London Science Museum's visitors number was 4 million for the
first
five years and then
continuously
dropped and
ultimately
arrived at its lowest point of about 2 million in 2015.
In addition
, Shenzhen Museum, which was the last choice
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in 1980's
, stayed about the same over the
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35 year
period. They fell from under 4 million in 1980 to
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just
over 3 million in 2000 and then rose to
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just
under 4 million in 2015.
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