The bar chart illustrates the information of individuals who consume five portions of fruits and vegetables of their daily diet between 2001 and 2008. Units who consume about 17% of fruits and vegetables in 2001 showed a steady rate from 2001 to 2003. , in 2004 the percentage rose to about 23% which further showed a rise of roughly 2% in 2005. Then it showed a stable growth during upcoming 2 years of nearly 27% and showed a decline of about 2%. Children who ate approximately 12% of healthy diet showed a same trend for continuous 3 years and then followed an upward trend with a difference of about two third. Whilst, in 2005 children ate 18% diet of daily routine, which showed a rise of 5%. In 2007, it reached to more than 25% and further declined to 23% in 2008. and children showed an upward trend during initial years then became steady for sometime while women experienced a rising trend throughout period and then decline to extent.
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